I got my second essay back this morning in English Class. I missed one comma, but managed an A+. I’m pretty happy about that as I was concerned about length as well as flow. I didn’t think it flowed as well as it could have.
Mr. Beverage disagreed, apparently.
When I showed him the title, he got a great big grin, and gave me specific permission to break the “No Slang” rule.
The prompt was a definition using illustration.
The essay, in its uncorrected form, lies below the fold.